This was our first contribution for Diana Wallace Peach monthly word prompt Challenge! Such an awe-inspiring image…

Image by Stephan Keller

Ancient Evil…

The frozen face of a still white moon

Hung against the starless sky

Remembering Zolon crouched below

His hand clenched on ancient evil

Where men were swallowed

Bones crushed by ice white teeth…

                      ©anitadawes 2020

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17 responses to “Another Chance to read Ancient Evil…”

  1. I love the way this flows. Nicely done. (Here from Diana’s blog.)

    1. Thanks, Mary…

  2. Excellent poetic inferences and beautifully crafted. Thank you for sharing.

    1. Thank you…

  3. Expertly crafted!

    1. Glad you liked it, Violet…

  4. Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
    A beautiful poem from Anita in response to the wintry prompt. I hope you enjoy. <3

    1. Thank you, Diana…

      1. Very welcome!

  5. Fantastic poem. Interesting to see what different writing styles there are.

    1. Anita is one of a kind, and I like to think her poems are too…

  6. Well done!

  7. Ooooh! That’s evocative! Nicely done.

    1. Thank you Staci!

  8. Oh my gosh, Anita. I have the chills. Wonderful poem. I’m sharing in order, so be patient, but I can’t wait to reblog! Happy Writing!

    1. Glad you liked it, Diana…

  9. Chilling imagery…

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