Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Another Chance to read Ancient Evil…

 

This was our first contribution for Diana Wallace Peach monthly word prompt Challenge! Such an awe-inspiring image…

Image by Stephan Keller

Ancient Evil…

The frozen face of a still white moon

Hung against the starless sky

Remembering Zolon crouched below

His hand clenched on ancient evil

Where men were swallowed

Bones crushed by ice white teeth…

                      ©anitadawes 2020

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  1. Mary J. McCoy-Dressel Avatar
    Mary J. McCoy-Dressel

    I love the way this flows. Nicely done. (Here from Diana’s blog.)

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thanks, Mary…

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  2. K. D. Dowdall Avatar
    K. D. Dowdall

    Excellent poetic inferences and beautifully crafted. Thank you for sharing.

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      jenanita01

      Thank you…

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  3. Violet Lentz Avatar
    Violet Lentz

    Expertly crafted!

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      jenanita01

      Glad you liked it, Violet…

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  4. D. Wallace Peach Avatar
    D. Wallace Peach

    Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
    A beautiful poem from Anita in response to the wintry prompt. I hope you enjoy. <3

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you, Diana…

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      1. D. Wallace Peach Avatar
        D. Wallace Peach

        Very welcome!

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  5. Marje @ Kyrosmagica Avatar
    Marje @ Kyrosmagica

    Fantastic poem. Interesting to see what different writing styles there are.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Anita is one of a kind, and I like to think her poems are too…

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  6. Jennie Avatar
    Jennie

    Well done!

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  7. Staci Troilo Avatar
    Staci Troilo

    Ooooh! That’s evocative! Nicely done.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you Staci!

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  8. D. Wallace Peach Avatar
    D. Wallace Peach

    Oh my gosh, Anita. I have the chills. Wonderful poem. I’m sharing in order, so be patient, but I can’t wait to reblog! Happy Writing!

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      jenanita01

      Glad you liked it, Diana…

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  9. tidalscribe Avatar
    tidalscribe

    Chilling imagery…

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