#Writephoto ~ Castle

Thursday photo prompt: Castle #writephoto

 

 

Image by scvincent.com

 

 

Ghosts…

Blue purple clouds above the castle dark

My body lying in the silver water below

My soul trapped within black castle walls

I wait, a ghost you cannot see.

The chains that held me,

hang against damp walls

My tormentors long gone, a forgotten time

Damp walls pulse with remembered pain

There are few visitors to this dark place

They never come twice

Strange feelings creep into the skin

They carry them away for a few weeks

My hope is one visitor will see me

Hear my whispered voice

They can read about my plight

In a paperback novel.

I need someone sensitive

to the horrors of this place

to feel my presence

lay flowers on the silver waters outside

reunite soul and body, help me move on

to pray for the ghost, they cannot see…

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  1. dgkaye Avatar

    Tragically beautiful Anita. I’ve tweeted in case you don’t see it, sadly, 75% blogs I read,. the tweet button doesn’t work and I had to share with an extension. :)

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you so much, Debby… Good to see you here too!

      1. dgkaye Avatar

        <3

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  3. Eliza Waters Avatar

    Nice, imaginative response to the challenge, Anita!

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Glad you think so, Eliza…

  4. tidalscribe Avatar

    Poignant, love the last three lines.

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you…

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  6. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Both tragic and beautiful….

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Glad you liked it, Sue…

      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        I did x

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