#Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

Carrot Ranch Challenge

April 11, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story using the phrase “beggars can’t be choosers.” You can play with the words, alter them or interpret them without using the phrase. Give it any slant you want — show what it means or add to its  meaning. Go where the prompt leads!

 

And this is our contribution…

 

Years ago when I wore second- hand clothes

Worn out shoes

Sleeping in a room with no heat

Blankets as thin as rice paper

I made my way long ago,

I am happy

Some I know are still searching

Most days, he sits at the corner of Waitrose

Playing his clarinet

I hear the coins drop into his open case

At his feet as I pass

Today, I would give him a choice

Between a sandwich and  coffee or a two- pound scratch card

I walked home eating the sandwich

Without waiting. I hoped he made the right choice.

AAAAA


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16 responses to “#Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry”

  1. She understands more than the feeling of cold and hunger — she also knows the hope for a better future might be worth forgoing a sandwich. Sometimes, choices are hard.

    1. You have that right, Charli…

  2. Both sad and hopeful at the same time. That takes talent. Beautifully done.

    1. Anita said Wow! and so do I, Staci… so glad you liked it so much…

      1. Very much.

  3. I really like this poem, Anita.

    1. Thank you, Robbie…jj

  4. Well done!

    1. Thank you, Jennie…

      1. You’re welcome!

  5. Very nice response to this weeks flash!

    1. Thanks, Susan…

  6. Glad your choices brought you happiness. this was a delightful story. Wishing for a winner on the scratcher…

    1. Thank you, Violet…

  7. Good for you. So many of us don’t have choices…x

    1. Thanks, Joy…

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