Thursday photo prompt: Murmur #writephoto

For visually challenged writers, the image shows dark clouds and bare trees against a fiery sunset, with a murmration of starlings creating a cloud of their own.

Red sky, flames from a hidden fire

Illuminates the dark barren land

Black clouds tendrils reaching

Searching the darkness for something lost

The sheer weight of it pushing me down

Slowing my footsteps

I longed for the murmur of waves along the shore

Where I paddled as a child

Somehow, I have been dropped into this wasteland

An unwanted morsel of humanity

No sign of life save for the starlings

Swaying, painting their patterns across the dark grey

Their sky murmur, a last dance before sleep

Reminding me of many a last dance

Played out over time

Do those lost lovers touch in sweet refrain?

Does our world echo a continuous murmur of love?

Do we feed from this almost silent murmur?

Like hungry children

I think it must be so, for we are still here

Swaying, dancing our own murmur in silence…

©Anita Dawes

This post is our tribute to Sue Vincent, for all the lovely prompts she has given us with #Writephoto over the years. To cheer her up on these dark days… GET WELL SOON, Sue…


Discover more from Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

Subscribe to get the latest posts sent to your email.


Comments

18 responses to “#WritephotoTribute ~ Murmur #Poetry”

  1. Beautiful, Anita! Perfect image, perfect words. :)

    1. Sue Vincent is always a wonderful inspiration…

      1. Definitely! :)

  2. I add my own murmur of love and healing thoughts to Sue- and to all of us as we sink into reality while we also soar with winged beings. ❤️

    1. Bless you! (and Sue!)

  3. This was beautiful. It made me smile.

    1. Thanks, Michele…

  4. […] Anita from Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie […]

  5. Beautifully penned, Anita. <3

    1. Thank you, Eliza…

  6. Beautiful… Sharing.

    1. Thanks Bette…

  7. This is stunning. I love the poignant feel. A beautiful response to a beautiful prompt.

    1. Thank you, Diana…

  8. […] Continue reading at Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie […]

  9. I love the almost breathless rhythm you have captured in this poem, Anita.

    1. So pleased that you like it, Sue…

      1. I do. :)

Leave a Reply

Discover more from Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

Subscribe now to keep reading and get access to the full archive.

Continue reading

Discover more from Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

Subscribe now to keep reading and get access to the full archive.

Continue reading