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The blue hour, when colours blend

Creating a strange place

Unknowable

Yet the mind holds on to something known

Between the space, we call day and night

Not awake, nor sleeping

Running from the dream maker

Towards daybreak

Sunlight full of promise

If only that one nagging thought

Did not remain

What did I touch?

In that moment between

That my heart remembers

Is it something lost to all of us?

©anitadawes

 


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11 responses to “The Inbetween… #Poetry”

  1. This is very interesting with its undertones of loss and sadness. Well done.

    1. We thank you, Robbie…

  2. Love this, Anita. Thanks for sharing. :)

    1. Thanks, Natalie…

  3. This gave me the chills, Anita. It’s so full of missing and longing. Beautiful.

    1. We thank you, Diana…

  4. Lovely. I think I’d like to go there for awhile :-)

    1. Thank you, Alethea…

  5. I love those last few lines… the something lost.

    1. Thank you…

  6. Lovely, Anita.

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