The Inbetween… #Poetry

 

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The blue hour, when colours blend

Creating a strange place

Unknowable

Yet the mind holds on to something known

Between the space, we call day and night

Not awake, nor sleeping

Running from the dream maker

Towards daybreak

Sunlight full of promise

If only that one nagging thought

Did not remain

What did I touch?

In that moment between

That my heart remembers

Is it something lost to all of us?

©anitadawes

 


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  1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    This is very interesting with its undertones of loss and sadness. Well done.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      We thank you, Robbie…

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  2. Natalie Ducey Avatar

    Love this, Anita. Thanks for sharing. :)

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thanks, Natalie…

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  3. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    This gave me the chills, Anita. It’s so full of missing and longing. Beautiful.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      We thank you, Diana…

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  4. Alethea Kehas Avatar

    Lovely. I think I’d like to go there for awhile :-)

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Alethea…

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  5. tidalscribe Avatar

    I love those last few lines… the something lost.

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  6. Jennie Avatar

    Lovely, Anita.

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