Thursday photo prompt: Fume #writephoto

Another inspiring image from Sue Vincent!

For visually challenged writers, the image shows a line of leaf-bare trees outlined against a pall of white smoke, brightly lit from within. The shape made by the smoke looks rather like the head of a mythical beast…

 

Something snapped

The world broke, turned black

One anomaly remained

Light from a new world

I stood witness to the birth of silence

My body ached,

to scream with joy or fear

I knew not which

Managing to let go of the breath

I had been holding

I heard the crackling of the fire.

My eyes filled with smoke

My beautiful vision of a new world

turned to horror at the sudden cleansing

I held on to the feeling, I had witnessed

Something strange within the smoke.

The feeling lingered

as I ran from the flames

Trying to give voice to something new

Something waiting…

©anitadawes

 

#writephoto


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9 responses to “#Writephoto ~ Fume #Poetry”

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  2. Lovely poem

    1. Thank you, Brenda…

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  4. Powerful! You left us aching for more! :D <3

    1. Thank you, Deborah!

  5. Wonderful poem. It’s an amazing prompt and you nailed it. :-)

    1. Thank you, Diana…

  6. Fabulous, Anita!

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