Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 145 #PhotoPrompt
We
Are the
Forgotten
Searching for land
Held by cold water
The pale sun no comfort
Banished by Odin’s gold eye
He left us thought, memory, song
Wednesday turns to black ravens’ wings
Thursday the hammer will fall, land we call…
©Anita Dawes
This could be the prologue to a grand saga.
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Maybe…
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Anita, I love this! It’s as if you channeled a fantasy novel from the image. Well done!! ❤
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So glad you liked it, Colleen…
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You have mixed fantasy with a touch of despair. It’s beautiful!
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Thank you, Elizabeth…
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I like this, it’s very cleverly done. I like Odin’s golden eye!
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Thank you, Jane…
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