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Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge… #PhotoPromptPoetry

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Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 145 #PhotoPrompt

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We

Are the

Forgotten

Searching for land

Held by cold water

The pale sun no comfort

Banished by Odin’s gold eye

He left us thought, memory, song

Wednesday turns to black ravens’ wings

Thursday the hammer will fall, land we call…

©Anita Dawes

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9 responses to “Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge… #PhotoPromptPoetry”

  1. Jane Dougherty Avatar
    Jane Dougherty

    I like this, it’s very cleverly done. I like Odin’s golden eye!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you, Jane…

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      1. Jane Dougherty Avatar
        Jane Dougherty

        :)

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  2. Elizabeth Avatar
    Elizabeth

    You have mixed fantasy with a touch of despair. It’s beautiful!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you, Elizabeth…

      Reply
  3. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen M. Chesebro

    Anita, I love this! It’s as if you channeled a fantasy novel from the image. Well done!! <3

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      So glad you liked it, Colleen…

      Reply
  4. rivrvlogr Avatar
    rivrvlogr

    This could be the prologue to a grand saga.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Maybe…

      Reply

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