What do you See #554e8d593-903d-469c-b15c-dc970d3c312f

 

The Edge of Vision

Rain waters the edge of my world

Dry patches

where I cannot place my feet

The world no longer spins

Caught on a tilt

I seem poised

Clinging to the edge of the bridge

Blue purple green colour

changing with the light

Having slipped from my mooring

I can no longer stand straight

inside my glass snow globe

The hand that holds me

wonders why…

©anitadawes

 


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10 responses to “What do you see # 5 #Keepitalive #Whatdoyousee #Poetry”

  1. The glass snow globe! So original, I love it!

    1. Thank you!

  2. Beautifully done :) I love these two lines:
    ‘Having slipped from my mooring
    I can no longer stand straight’
    Maybe it’s because I sometimes feel like this.

    1. Thank you, Chris…

  3. Great take, i like this

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  5. Very profound! Love it. Thanks for participating in the Prompt.

    1. Our pleasure…

      1. 👍🥰

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