Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge…

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Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes
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“The Circle of Life” #Senryu

 

 

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Time

Turning

Ever round

Orbit spinning

Old ghosts whispering

The clock ticks twelve, new year

Could be old for new turning

Aladdin’s lamp with genie too

Rubbed to make your old wishes come true

Turn once more to ticking clock, start again…

©anitadawes 2020

 

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7 responses to “Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge…”

  1. judeitakali Avatar
    judeitakali

    loved the rhythm and flow of this, great read

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      A lovely comment, Jude…

      Reply
      1. judeitakali Avatar
        judeitakali

        My pleasure

        Reply
  2. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen M. Chesebro

    The turning of the wheel of time. Well done! ❤️

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thanks, Colleen…

      Reply
  3. D. Wallace Peach Avatar
    D. Wallace Peach

    Excellent take on the prompt. What a lovely poem, Anita.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you, Diana…

      Reply

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