99 Word Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

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April 18, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about gender. It can be fixed or fluid. Explore the topic on your own terms and open your mind to possibilities and understanding. Go where the prompt leads!

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Boys and girls

My mother’s despair plain to see

At my unladylike behaviour

As I climb the conker tree

With my dress tucked inside my underwear

To beat the boys was my game

I take my brother’s double cap gun holster

Make my own bow and arrow

Dolls and frills were not for me

Until a daughter came to me

I dress her in silks and frills

As my mother would have liked to see

Quite the woman I turned out to be

My daughter never climbed a tree

No guns, no bows and arrows

Today’s boys and girls play the same…

AAAAA


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10 responses to “99 Word Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry”

  1. Love the twist in this, grew up with four brothers and a neighbourhood of boys … had to be a tomboy just to survive but I am most comfortable being a woman :)

    1. I think we are multi-facetted when it comes to our identities… We can roll in the mud one day, and behave like a princess the next…

      1. yes and having the broad perspective keeps us better grounded :)

  2. Individuality goes beyond gender and breaking free of the confines simply allows each of us to be human beings. Love how you expressed the individuality in your poem, Anita.

    1. Thank you, Charli. This subject is important to me…

  3. I was always a girlie girl, Anita. I loved dolls and teddy bears and tea sets. My youngest sister was not into any of these things. We are all individuals.

    1. Vive la difference!

      1. Nothing wrong with difference.

  4. What I love about this poem is how children just are who they are. It’s wonderful when parents honor that freedom to be. Great poem that made me smile. :-)

    1. I thought Anita handled this one beautifully…

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