#Flash Fiction 99 Word Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community

 

Carrot Ranch Challenge

 

The Attic

Clearing out the attic

I found Grandads chisels

carefully wrapped in cloth.

He is no longer with us

But I remember him telling me

Always look after your tools.

He was the same with all his tools

Paintbrushes must be thoroughly cleaned.

Unwrapping the cloth, five chisels

as good as the day he bought them

Rosewood handles, each blade sharp

as the last time he held them.

I could feel him beside me

nudging me to find the wooden train set

he made for my twelfth birthday.

I found so much more, I rediscovered

My grandfather, his lost wisdom…

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8 responses to “#Flash Fiction 99 Word Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community”

  1. Very sweet and sentimental :)

    1. Thank you, Kate…

      1. most welcome Jenanita

  2. The sense of discovery goes deeper than the physical items found. Each description brings home the visual images and the emotional transformation. Well done, Anita.

    1. So true, Charli… glad you liked it!

  3. Lovely!

  4. How sweet and full of love and nostalgia. Lovely poem.

    1. Thank you, Diana…

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