Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Another Entry for Colleen’s #Poetry Challenge… #Cinquain & Haiku

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Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes
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I blame Colleen for encouraging Anita with all of her fabulous poetry forms.

Somebody needs to stop her, before she loses control!

 

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New Butterfly Cinquain

Bitter

Eastern winds blow

My breath is frozen fast

Sharp thoughts flare, calling from my past

Answer

I recall her face on dark glass

A love from many lifetimes

She stands waiting

Time lost

Haiku

Sharp frosted feelings

Burn, smoulder, with rage, life cold

Cutting through my heart…

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7 responses to “Another Entry for Colleen’s #Poetry Challenge… #Cinquain & Haiku”

  1. Colleen’s 2019 #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 120, “Storm & Cold,” #SynonymsOnly – Colleen Chesebro ~ The Faery Whisperer

    […] Storm & Cold, #Butterfly #CinquainPoetryBitterEastern winds blowMy breath is frozen fastSharp thoughts flare, calling from my pastAnswerI recall her face on dark glassA love from many lifetimesShe stands waitingTime lostAnita Dawes […]

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  2. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Jaye, tell Anita that I love how inspired she gets! Good for her, the Butterfly Cinquain and the Senryu were spectacular. <3

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      She will be thrilled!

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    2. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      No stopping her now…

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      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        LOL! <3

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  3. Jordy Avatar
    Jordy

    Gorgeous poem, beautiful images, and filled with emotion.💗🤗

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you, Jordy…

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