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Deep
inside
my mind’s eye
I see green clouds
I lie on blue grass
with purple candy floss
the day spins into wonder
memories float out into space
caught inside multi coloured bubbles
I found my happy place, inside my mind’s eye…

©AnitaDawes2022

#TankaTuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge No. 279: #Tastetherainbow-Color/Weather Poetry


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31 responses to “Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge”

  1. Absolutely beautiful.

    1. Thank you, Vivienne… 💕

  2. wonderful poem. beautifully written

    1. Thank you, Neeraj, good to see you here!

  3. Lovely poem. Will there be something new for this week or shall I use this prompt? Thanks for hosting too!

  4. You can easily drift away and wonderful poem Anita ♥

    1. Thanks Sally…

  5. So beautiful.

    1. Thank you, Jude…

  6. That was beautiful. Things always look better in our mind’s eye. <3

    1. They always do, don’t they Debby…

  7. Anita, I loved your use of color and weather. What a lovely place this must be. <3

    1. Thank you, Colleen…

      1. You’re always welcome. <3

  8. I loved this, Anita! Your imagery is beautiful, and I love how your poem comes full circle. :-)

    1. Thank you so much, Yvette…

  9. D.L. Finn, Author Avatar
    D.L. Finn, Author

    Loved this. Reminded of a peaceful summer day.

    1. hear, hear! me too :-)

      <3
      David

      1. Bless you, David…

  10. Beautiful

    1. Thank you, Ruth…

  11. This is so beautiful Anita just so beautiful 💜

    1. So glad you liked it, Willow…

      1. I did Anita 💜

  12. Beautiful picture painted. :)

    1. Thank you, Kitty…

  13. A wonderful response to the prompt!

    1. Thanks, Jan. means a lot!

  14. So beautiful, Anita. I love this 💕🙂

    1. Thank you so much, Harmony…

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