Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge

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Deep
inside
my mind’s eye
I see green clouds
I lie on blue grass
with purple candy floss
the day spins into wonder
memories float out into space
caught inside multi coloured bubbles
I found my happy place, inside my mind’s eye…

©AnitaDawes2022

#TankaTuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge No. 279: #Tastetherainbow-Color/Weather Poetry

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  1. V.M.Sang Avatar
    V.M.Sang

    Absolutely beautiful.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar
      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      Thank you, Vivienne… 💕

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  2. undiarly Avatar
    undiarly

    wonderful poem. beautifully written

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you, Neeraj, good to see you here!

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  3. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar
    Stine Writing and Miniatures

    Lovely poem. Will there be something new for this week or shall I use this prompt? Thanks for hosting too!

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  4. Smorgasbord - Variety is the Spice of Life. Avatar
    Smorgasbord – Variety is the Spice of Life.

    You can easily drift away and wonderful poem Anita ♥

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thanks Sally…

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  5. judeitakali Avatar
    judeitakali

    So beautiful.

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you, Jude…

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  6. dgkaye Avatar
    dgkaye

    That was beautiful. Things always look better in our mind’s eye. <3

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      They always do, don’t they Debby…

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  7. Colleen Chesebro: WordCraftPoetry Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro: WordCraftPoetry

    Anita, I loved your use of color and weather. What a lovely place this must be. <3

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you, Colleen…

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      1. Colleen Chesebro: WordCraftPoetry Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro: WordCraftPoetry

        You’re always welcome. <3

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  8. yvettemcalleiro Avatar
    yvettemcalleiro

    I loved this, Anita! Your imagery is beautiful, and I love how your poem comes full circle. :-)

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you so much, Yvette…

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  9. D.L. Finn, Author Avatar
    D.L. Finn, Author

    Loved this. Reminded of a peaceful summer day.

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you!

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    2. ben Alexander Avatar
      ben Alexander

      hear, hear! me too :-)

      <3
      David

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      1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
        Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

        Bless you, David…

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  10. RuthScribbles Avatar
    RuthScribbles

    Beautiful

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      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you, Ruth…

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  11. willowdot21 Avatar
    willowdot21

    This is so beautiful Anita just so beautiful 💜

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      So glad you liked it, Willow…

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      1. willowdot21 Avatar
        willowdot21

        I did Anita 💜

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  12. kittysverses Avatar
    kittysverses

    Beautiful picture painted. :)

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you, Kitty…

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  13. Jan Sikes Avatar
    Jan Sikes

    A wonderful response to the prompt!

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thanks, Jan. means a lot!

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  14. harmonykentonline Avatar
    harmonykentonline

    So beautiful, Anita. I love this 💕🙂

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    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you so much, Harmony…

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