October #BlogBattle: Scattered


My granddaughter dropped her kaleidoscope
From the top window
Tiny, coloured pieces scattered across the patio
I heard her little footsteps running down the stairs
Holding my breath, hoping she wouldn’t fall
Three-year-olds often know no fear
The tiny jewels shone under bright sunlight
Lost treasure belonging to the shining ones
Running into the kitchen where I stood
Watching the coloured dancing lights
Renewing my faith in magic
“I didn’t throw it Nan,
I tried to find more light to make the pieces shine”
Hugging my leg, her tears drying on my apron
Looking at her tear-stained face
I couldn’t tell her off for playing near an open window
Taking her hand, we walked outside
We will go to town and buy a new one
With a sob in her voice, she said
“It is a broken rainbow…

© Anita Dawes 2021


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8 responses to “#BlogBattle ~ Scattered ~ #Poetry”

  1. Loved all the vivid imagery of both sight and sound. Especially liked the line about three-year-olds often know no fear. Nice!

    1. Thank you! 💕

  2. […] “Scattered” by Anita Dawes […]

  3. Kids put things into words much better than adults sometimes do.

    1. They do…

  4. Such a touching poem

    1. Thank you, Sadje… 💕

      1. You’re welcome

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