Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Our entry for Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge

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Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes
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Colleen’s 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 168 #SynonymsOnly

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Here are the two words selected by Ruth Scribbles, from last month’s #SyllablesOnly challenge:

COMFORT & WORN

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Image by Dimitris Vetsikas from Pixabay

 

My

Armchair

Soft comfort

Worn out, threadbare

Like me, it’s timeworn

Yet happiness lives there

relief for my aching back

My very tattered worn out friend

It started life in my mother’s house

Something no amount of money can buy…

©anitadawes 2020

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14 responses to “Our entry for Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge”

  1. tracikenworth Avatar
    tracikenworth

    Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger for all Genres as well as craft books and commented:
    Just lovely!

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  2. Elizabeth Avatar
    Elizabeth

    Beautiful poem! For sure money can’t buy most of the treasures.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you, Elizabeth…

      Reply
  3. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen M. Chesebro

    How lovely this is Anita. Did you ever notice that the older we get the more we value our chair? <3

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      We do, don’t we?

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  4. D. Wallace Peach Avatar
    D. Wallace Peach

    Those old comfortable chairs are like friends. I have one too. :-) Well done, Anita.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Best place in the world…

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  5. judeitakali Avatar
    judeitakali

    Now I also want to sit in that armchair 😁

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      You would be welcome, Jude…

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      1. judeitakali Avatar
        judeitakali

        😁👌🏾👍🏾

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  6. robertawrites235681907 Avatar
    robertawrites235681907

    I also love family heirlooms, Anita. A fabulous poem.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you, Robbie…

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  7. Stine Writing Avatar
    Stine Writing

    I can feel how cozy sitting in that arm chair is! For reasons related to losing my husband and son, I have either sold or donated most of the furniture I have had for the past 20 years. I have replaced it all with a hand-me-down from David’s brother’s girlfriend. It was a decision that was easy and hard to make but it brought heartache, not warmth and love.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      We hope that one day the hand me down will afford a small amount of comfort. We are sorry for your loss…

      Reply

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