#Writephoto ~ Stillness #Poetry

Thursday photo prompt: Stillness #writephoto

 

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image by scvincent.com

The image shows the dark silhouette of a cliff and against a calm sea and a sun-gold horizon.

 

 

#writephoto

 

Rock, sea and sky, what more could I ask for

The stillness, oh, the stillness

Where birds dare not fly, the air undisturbed

My heart slows in memory of a time unspoken

The quickening begins as I step into the salt sea

My mind invaded with primitive thoughts

An old-time movie, how long has it played there

How many minds have changed, standing here?

Did they notice time playing before their eyes?

Am I the only fool to stand wrapped in stillness?

My mind damaged by no sound entering

No help to rearrange my thoughts

What do I take back from this strange place?

Will it be renewed stillness of mind to carry me

through the remainder of my life…

©anitadawes

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  2. BeckiesMentalMess.wordpress.com Avatar

    Beautifully penned. Quite poignant.

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  4. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Beautiful, Anita.
    I don’t think you can help wondering when you stand in these liminal places…

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      The silence is magical, and fleeting…

      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        And much needed sometimes.

        1. jenanita01 Avatar

          Always, for me…

  5. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Beautiful, Anita. I love the wondering about who has been there before and that connection of people to a place through time. Nicely done. :-)

    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you, Diana…

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