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You are mine

I lay hidden in the long grass, watching

Her dress slid from her shoulders

Her milk white skin drawing me in

Slowly, she walked into the cool water

Sun glistening diamonds played

around the water’s surface

Her long black hair floated free, like seaweed

As she disappeared beneath the surface

Venus, vanished for a second

I held my breath, waiting for her to rise

To bless my eyes with her beauty

My mind telling me I should leave

This was her private moment

I couldn’t move,

she had been under too long

I needed to rescue her

Diving in I found nothing

Sliding beneath the water once more

Seeing little,

I felt a hand pull me further under

The water growing darker

Yet I could see her clearly

Her voice inside my head

“I knew you would come

Your soul is mine, as it has been

Throughout time.

We cannot live apart

We will surface as one…”

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14 responses to “You are mine… #Poetry”

    1. Thank you, Traci…

      1. You’re welcome, Jaye!

  1. Oh, this is full of mystery and a bit dark.

    1. I thought so too, Robbie.

  2. Reblogged this on Writing Despite Computers and Programmes and commented:
    Here is a beautifully woven tale of legend and warning?

    1. Glad you liked it!

  3. There’s a ballet waiting somewhere to do honour to this.
    Re-blogged.

    1. What a wonderful comment! Thank you…

      1. My pleasure. 😃

  4. Eerie. He got more than he bargained for!

    1. Anita has written a mini fairytale… and it is spooky…

  5. Deep and beautiful. Wonderful piece of writing.

    1. Thank you…

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