Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge…

Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 137 #SynonymsOnly

 

My

Loving

Father said

You have it all

Move your thoughts forward

Plan your life your own way

Make as many changes you need

I felt my father’s gentle whisper

With his help, I became the butterfly…

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9 responses to “Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge…”

  1. This sent little shivers of loveliness up my spine. Wonderful, Anita.

    1. We thank you so much, Diana…

  2. I love this!

    1. Thank you, Jacquie…

  3. This is a lovely poem of metamorphosis.

    1. Thank you, Robbie…

  4. I love the growth experienced by the main character across such a short poem!

    1. Thank you so much…

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