Thursday photo prompt: Bright #writephoto

 

 

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Image by scvincent.com

 

Waiting

 

The woodland at the back of my house is a place I visit often. Today I noticed a bright pillar of light swaying as if windblown. There were shadows dancing, whispered voices, children playing.

The children in the light wait to be born. My mother and grandmother told me the same tale, but I never expected to see it. I could sit here forever watching, wanting to hold it in my mind. I may not be lucky enough to see it again.

Two hours I sat, before going home, where my wife told me she was pregnant.

Floored by the news, telling my wife of my experience, I had to wonder, had one of those dancing shadows waited to make me a father?

I like to think so…

AAAAA


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26 responses to “#Writephoto ~ Bright #Poetry”

  1. […] Anita from Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie […]

  2. Lovely and magical!

  3. Lovely…

  4. Such a beautiful story 💜💜

    1. Thank you!

      1. 💜💜

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    Alli Templeton

    Beautifully worded and imagined. I really love ‘The children in the light wait to be born’. Lovely imagery and a lovely tale.

    1. Thank you so much…

  6. This is beautiful. What a great story.

    1. Thanks, Michele…

  7. What a delightful little story. So heart-warming and unusual. xx

    1. Glad you liked it, Joy…

  8. Reblogged this on Not Tomatoes and commented:
    A lovely little story by Anita Dawes

    1. Anita sends her thanks, Alethea… as do I…

      1. You’re both welcome <3

  9. So lovely, “children in the light wait to be born.” <3

    1. Again, Anita thanks you, Alethea… so pleased you enjoyed it…

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  11. Delightful, Anita.

    1. Lovely prompt, too…

  12. What a beautiful thought.. I only….

    1. almost a fairy tale…

  13. What a lovely tale, Anita. x

    1. I think Anita was inspired,

      1. It rather looks that way :)

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