#Writephoto ~ Bright #Poetry

Thursday photo prompt: Bright #writephoto

 

 

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Waiting

 

The woodland at the back of my house is a place I visit often. Today I noticed a bright pillar of light swaying as if windblown. There were shadows dancing, whispered voices, children playing.

The children in the light wait to be born. My mother and grandmother told me the same tale, but I never expected to see it. I could sit here forever watching, wanting to hold it in my mind. I may not be lucky enough to see it again.

Two hours I sat, before going home, where my wife told me she was pregnant.

Floored by the news, telling my wife of my experience, I had to wonder, had one of those dancing shadows waited to make me a father?

I like to think so…

AAAAA


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  1. Eliza Waters Avatar

    Lovely and magical!

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  2. Bette A. Stevens Avatar

    Lovely…

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  3. willowdot21 Avatar

    Such a beautiful story 💜💜

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  4. Alli Templeton Avatar

    Beautifully worded and imagined. I really love ‘The children in the light wait to be born’. Lovely imagery and a lovely tale.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thank you so much…

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  5. Michele Jones Avatar

    This is beautiful. What a great story.

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Thanks, Michele…

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  6. joylennick Avatar

    What a delightful little story. So heart-warming and unusual. xx

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Glad you liked it, Joy…

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  7. Alethea Kehas Avatar

    Reblogged this on Not Tomatoes and commented:
    A lovely little story by Anita Dawes

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Anita sends her thanks, Alethea… as do I…

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      1. Alethea Kehas Avatar

        You’re both welcome <3

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  8. Alethea Kehas Avatar

    So lovely, “children in the light wait to be born.” <3

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Again, Anita thanks you, Alethea… so pleased you enjoyed it…

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      Lovely prompt, too…

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  10. Violet Lentz Avatar

    What a beautiful thought.. I only….

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      almost a fairy tale…

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  11. Sue Vincent Avatar

    What a lovely tale, Anita. x

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar

      I think Anita was inspired,

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      1. Sue Vincent Avatar

        It rather looks that way :)

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