#FlashFiction 99 Word Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

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Bus Stop

Outside my living room window stands a bus stop

One afternoon, I counted fourteen people waiting

 Watched as a colonnade of human souls were

Swallowed by a red giant.

The two o clock journey had begun

Where are they going?

Will their day be a good one?

This I will never know

I will not see their journey back

The return bus stop is further down

The road where I cannot see

I make up my own stories

About the faces standing waiting

The old lady with her green scarf

She is off to see her grandson…

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6 responses to “#FlashFiction 99 Word Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry”

  1. Wonderful! Watching characters get on and deciding for yourself where they end up. Storyteller’s delight!

    1. and all in 99 words!

  2. Fabulous imagery, “colonnade of souls.” I enjoyed this voyeuristic glimpse of a bus stop.

    1. Thank you, Charli…

  3. This is a clever usage of the prompt word, Anita. I don’t have any ideas for this at all.

    1. Anita found this one difficult!

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