Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge… #Etheree

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 108, “Afraid & Grave,” #SynonymsOnly

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World

Gone by

Time entombed

Webs hang thin white

The walls dripped pain loss

Risky to touch the past

To Heaven unsafe, fearful

Being undone by my past thought

Crushed by fear, the light grows dimmer

I see faces from the past, dead, long gone…

©Anita Dawes

 

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6 responses to “Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge… #Etheree”

  1. […] Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge… #Etheree | anita dawes and jaye marie  […]

  2. Beautiful, eerie and sad. Wonderful Etheree, Anita. :D xo

    1. Anita thanks you, Vashti…

  3. […] Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge… #Etheree | anita dawes and jaye marie  […]

  4. Well done! I love the mournful tone of the Etheree. Samhain is all about the ancestors and you captured that perfectly. <3

    1. We thank you, Colleen…

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