This week, Anita has excelled… not just an ordinary Etheree for she has attempted a double Etheree poem! I am impressed, how about you?
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Double Etheree: TIME
Soul
empty
Lost dark star
hands held slow dance
Love song remembered
Time flies and we grow old
Dark empty space left behind
To love lost long ago, tears shed
Slow handheld time rhythm left alone
Let no soul remain to cry at windows
As I am passing by this empty life
I stand all alone to shed my tears
Tears shed too long in fruitless pain
Vacant phantom I once said
Sunken life is depressed
Void the empty shell
I left outside
incomplete
searching
done
©Anita Dawes
Wow, Anita! Very ambitious undertaking with great results. I’m impressed too! 😀 xo
Anita says she surprised herself with the Etheree!
Well done, Anita! I’m thrilled that you are loving the Etheree form. <3
No stopping her now!
LOL! 🎃🧡
I’m definitely impressed!
Thank you, Cathy…