Be aware, I am slowly passing through your world

Stirred by all the emotions I see.

I check each groggy face

searching for the trigger

that puts that strange look in your eyes.

I travel through your dream space,

through pale landscapes

Where I find many of you cursed by low dark thoughts.

There is no anchor by which you can

hold on to the wonderful moments in life.

Hope has been swallowed by the dark deeds

of those who crush your dreams…

©AnitaDawes2024


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8 responses to “Passing Through… #Poetry”

  1. Let us hope we can raise our Dreams once more Anita, to do the opposite as we crush those dark deeds .. Excellent poem x

    1. thanks for such a lovely comment, Sue 💖

  2. D.L. Finn, Author Avatar
    D.L. Finn, Author

    Chilling…

    1. I thought so too… Anita is writing some great poems lately…

  3. I feel the deep sadness and hopelessness.

    1. I hope it doesn’t reflect Anita’s feelings…

  4. Dark, dark … chuckles. I hope a small brandy was partaken after this? 😎

    1. Anita doesn’t drink, but I needed one, Steve…

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