Passing Through… #Poetry

Be aware, I am slowly passing through your world

Stirred by all the emotions I see.

I check each groggy face

searching for the trigger

that puts that strange look in your eyes.

I travel through your dream space,

through pale landscapes

Where I find many of you cursed by low dark thoughts.

There is no anchor by which you can

hold on to the wonderful moments in life.

Hope has been swallowed by the dark deeds

of those who crush your dreams…

©AnitaDawes2024


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  1. Sue Dreamwalker Avatar

    Let us hope we can raise our Dreams once more Anita, to do the opposite as we crush those dark deeds .. Excellent poem x

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      thanks for such a lovely comment, Sue 💖

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  2. D.L. Finn, Author Avatar

    Chilling…

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      I thought so too… Anita is writing some great poems lately…

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  3. Author Jan Sikes Avatar

    I feel the deep sadness and hopelessness.

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      I hope it doesn’t reflect Anita’s feelings…

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  4. Steve Tanham Avatar

    Dark, dark … chuckles. I hope a small brandy was partaken after this? 😎

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    1. Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes Avatar

      Anita doesn’t drink, but I needed one, Steve…

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