We now have a gloriously new and improved blurb for The Scarlet Ribbon, thanks to the wonderful response to Monday’s post, The Blessed Blurb ~ Help Needed.

Grateful thanks to all of your helpful suggestions, especially those from Audrey, Darlene, John and Annette…

The new, improved blurb

Where do you go when you’re in a coma?

A car loses control and mows Maggie down in the street, changing her life forever. She never liked her life, but when she ends up in a coma, she fights desperately to wake up to the sound of her husband’s voice.

Lost in the world of the coma, unable to communicate, she is forced to witness the bitter truth of her old life. In this dark place, she rescues an abused and terrified child, determined to take her home.

Trapped between life and death, Maggie doesn’t know what is real or a dream. She needs to wake up to change her life and help this child.

But is this possible if forced to stay in a nightmare world?

But will I pay for another blurb?

Maybe not. This exercise, and the helpful responses we received, have taught us so much.

We have ten more blurbs to check, improve and/or rewrite. Hopefully, the write angels are on our side this time!

Happy Blurb writing!