Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes

Colleens Weekly Poetry Challenge #ThemePrompt

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Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes
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#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 291, 9/27/22, #THEMEPROMPT

The Nature of Lightning

Image by Pete Linforth from Pixabay

I
feel your
hungry eyes
touch my body
I will hold you close
move like a hurricane
lose our souls in the storm wind
love like the last lightning strike
watch as the world fades into darkness
leave nothing to chance but your hungry eyes
enter the dragons mouth, hear lightning
tear each star from the vault of heaven
dance on the dark side of the moon
write history with blue light
hungry eyes speak of love
lightning, our song
let me be struck
more than once
touch me
again

©AnitaDawes2022

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19 responses to “Colleens Weekly Poetry Challenge #ThemePrompt”

  1. Gwen M. Plano Avatar
    Gwen M. Plano

    Intense, sensual, and OMG wonderful! I love it. ❤️

    Reply
    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you for such a wonderful response, Gwen…

      Reply
  2. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    Smoldering hot. Who could resist!

    Reply
    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Not me, that’s for sure…

      Reply
  3. SelmaMartin Avatar
    SelmaMartin

    hungry eyes, touch me again. Wow!

    Reply
    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you, Selma!

      Reply
  4. dgkaye Avatar
    dgkaye

    This was some beautifully evoked passionate poem. <3

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      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you, Debby…

      Reply
      1. dgkaye Avatar
        dgkaye

        :)

        Reply
  5. ben Alexander Avatar
    ben Alexander

    Ommigosh, guys, this is excellent!

    ~David

    Reply
    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Thank you, David…

      Reply
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  7. D. Wallace Peach Avatar
    D. Wallace Peach

    Such intense passion. Awesome poem, Anita.

    Reply
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      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      We thank you so much Diana, such a wonderful comment…

      Reply
  8. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen M. Chesebro

    This is absolutely stunning, Anita. I love what you did with this! 💜

    Reply
    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      Wow! You have just made my sisters day!

      Reply
      1. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen M. Chesebro

        I think it’s excellent. Well done, Anita! ⚡️

        Reply
  9. kittysverses Avatar
    kittysverses

    Wow!! Splendid. :)

    Reply
    1. Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie Avatar
      Anita Dawes and Jaye Marie

      We thank you, Kitty…

      Reply

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