Colleen’s #Poetry Challenge ~ #Specific Form ~ 4-11 ~ #Dreaming

TankaTuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 284, 8/9/22, #SpecificForm: 4-11

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Will we meet again
When I’m dreaming
My heart beats loud
Like the ocean
Rushing to shore
Searching for you
Are you dreaming
Waiting for me
Hold the dark nights
I’m on my way
Will we meet again?

©AnitaDawes2022

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35 responses to “Colleen’s #Poetry Challenge ~ #Specific Form ~ 4-11 ~ #Dreaming”

  1. Que lindo

    1. Thank you for your lovely comment, and welcome!

  2. A beautifully romantic love poem, Anita.♥️
    The image is beautiful too.

    1. Thank you, Vashti…

      1. You’re welcome.😊

  3. Gwen M. Plano Avatar
    Gwen M. Plano

    Oh my gosh, what an incredible love poem. The longing is palpable, as is love’s movement. Beautiful, Anita. ❤️

    1. What a lovely comment, Gwen, but I know what you mean, my sisters poem moved me to tears!

  4. oh, how lovely and romantic, Anita! <3

    love this!

    ~David

    1. Thank you so much, David…

  5. Reblogged this on Reena Saxena.

  6. So quietly passionate. Lovely.

    1. Thank you, Margaret…

  7. Anita, this is beautiful! 💜

    1. Really glad you like it, Colleen, I get nervous with the new ones…

      1. It’s stunning! Great job. ❤️

  8. Oh, yes, we will meet again! September! The beach that is. ;)

  9. That’s great metaphorical, with ebb and flow. xx Michael

    1. Glad you liked it, Michael…

  10. This is so beautiful, oh! That we were all connected by dreams 💜

    1. We appreciate your lovely comment, Willow…

      1. It’s always a pleasure 💜

  11. Aw, this is so touching, Anita! I love it! :-)

    1. Thank you, Yvette…

  12. Just lovely. I love this form.

    1. I hear you had something to do with it?

      1. Oh, I wish. Lol. It’s Gwen Plano’s form, and it’s producing some wonderful poetry. :-D

        1. It is an unusual one, for sure…

  13. ‘Hold the dark nights’ … such a powerful line. Love this, Anita 💕🙂

  14. Well done you!

    1. Thank you, Annette…

    1. Thank you, Saania…

  15. Dreamy and nice. :)

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