October 7, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes whispers. It can be beautiful or creepy and any genre. Where are the whispers, who are they from, and what do they say if they say anything at all.

Whispers...

Death closed its hand
Beneath the whispering autumn leaves
The old head stones tell of loved ones
I wonder, are some souls on fire?
Do they all lie at rest
Do they whisper of dancing under the sun?
Kissing under moonlight
Do they come back
Whispering in my brain
Of life beyond these cold stones
As yet, none have whispered 
Of angels, golden harps or seeing Christ
Before you think me mad
I don’t hear disembodied voices all the time
There is one that stays with me
A female voice, telling me life goes on
Right there, beside you…

© Anita Dawes 2021

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7 responses to “Carrot Ranch Literary Community ~ Whispers”

  1. […] Whispers by Anita Dawes […]

  2. Chills! Great last line, Anita.

    1. Thank you, Charli…

  3. Good one, Anita, and it is good to have that voice beside you.

    1. Thank you, John… 🙏🏻

  4. Beautiful, Anita.

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