COLLEEN’S 2020 WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 196, #THEMEPROMPT

This month’s theme is:

The Night Sky

Stars
To light
My dark nights
To show me more
Dancing colours bright
Moving for my delight
Between the trees a jewel
Sparkling magic to dress each branch
Great wonders made by His word alone
To always light my way home, on the edge…

©anitadawes 2020


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16 responses to “COLLEEN’S 2020 WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 196, #THEMEPROMPT”

  1. I really enjoyed this. Lovely. :)

  2. Excellent Etheree, Anita. I love that you are on the mend. The last line adds a touch of reality to the poem. I like: “on the edge…” that can mean many different things. <3

    1. Anita sends her thanks, Colleen…

      1. Perfect. ❤️

  3. Lovely, Abita. The last line adds a bit of mystery. A lot of awe and wonder in this poem.

    1. Thanks, Diana…glad you liked it!

  4. This is lovely, Anita.

    1. Thank you, Robbie!

  5. “Sparkling magic to dress each branch….” wonderful.

    1. Glad you liked it, Chel!

  6. Absolutely Anita I agree with Kim 💜

    1. Bless you!

      1. 💜💜💜

  7. Very beautiful verse, Anita!

    1. Thank you, Kim!

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