Thursday photo prompt: Dance #writephoto

 

Sue Vincent is the host of Thursday Photo Prompt

Image by scvincent.com

For visually challenged writers, the image shows a pale sun piercing the mists above a green path through a golden field, leading into the centre of a circle of stones.

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They Dance

Our star hung colourless

Unable to pierce the grey mist.

As I walked, the green path

with golden fields flanking my sides

I could feel the loneliness

The empty forgotten dance.

For a moment, I wanted to stop

Walk back leave these grey stones

With their ancient memories.

That thought compelled me

To walk on into the circle of stones.

I could barely make out the bank of growth

along the skyline. The mist hung thick

as I entered the stones

I lost the feeling of loneliness.

Replaced by a knowing

I was waiting for something to happen

No, not something, someone

To come back through the mist.

She came towards me

A dark-haired beauty wearing

a white dress that reached the ground

Her arms held out towards me

Before I left the stone circle

I danced with an angel…

©anitadawes 2020

 

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15 responses to “#Writephoto ~ Dance #Poetry”

  1. You captured the feeling of being safe once beyond the uncertain path to get there. :)

    1. Sue Vincent’s prompts always bring out the best of our imagination!

      1. Yes they certainly do. 😊

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  3. Beautiful, hopeful and uplifting 💜

    1. Thank you, Willowdot…

      1. A pleasure 💜

  4. This was beautiful 💕🙂

    1. Thank you, Christine…

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  6. This is so beautiful. Gorgeous verse, I really loved the ending

    1. Thanks, Jude…

      1. My pleasure

  7. Wonderful, Anita. You really caught the mood here x

    1. Thank you so much, Sue…

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