Thursday photo prompt: Copper #writephoto

 

 

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The old copper road

As children we were told that strange things happened

Along the old copper road during the autumn equinox.

I have walked it many times as a child

An old dust road grubbied my white socks

Mother knew I had disobeyed

She would say I was lucky to have returned.

I remembered thinking grown-ups

were very strange beings

I wondered if they could be aliens.

For me, it was a peaceful place to walk

Copper leaves shining under a weak sun

Soft breeze lifting the turning leaves

Reminding me of flamingo dancers, how the dresses

would lift, swirl with each stamp of their feet

I remember the stories of people disappearing

Of stargates, time warps, alternate realities

Grabbing people to populate new dimensions.

As a mother I wondered if I would let

my little ones walk there alone

Suddenly my feet decided to walk it

Something I hadn’t done since childhood

Mother’s house felt the same, yet now it belongs to me

What is it about the grown-up mind

that changes everything?

I could feel the warning in my body to be careful.

I hoped I would make it back to read the note

I left on my dining room table

“You are lucky to have returned…”

©anita dawes


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21 responses to “#Writephoto ~ Copper”

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  2. This is really beautiful! <3

    1. Thank you!

  3. Lovely ending to the melancholic read!!

    1. Thank you, Daisybala…

  4. Love it…

    1. Thank you, Bette…

  5. Love the word choices and pacing ofd the lines- very much like striding along.
    Well done!

    1. Thank you!

  6. Ooh, just a hint of the macabre, nice!

    1. Thanks Eliza…

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  8. Subtly chilling, Anita. Loved it.

    1. Thank you, Steve… means a lot!

  9. I love this!

    1. Thank you, Joan…

  10. A very strange place, this… the type of path your mother would warn you about ;)

    1. Can’t wait to know about that…

      1. Thursday ;)

        1. Sigh…

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