#FlashFiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

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September 26: Flash Fiction Challenge

Prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about someone unremembered. Is it a momentary lapse or a loss in time? Play with the tone — make it funny, moving, or eerie. Go where the prompt leads you!

 

I cannot think of anyone forgotten to me

I am sure if I walk around my local graveyard

There would be so many forgotten souls

With no living relatives to lay flowers

I will lay a flower on a few bare graves

as I pass through to show they’re remembered

I asked a Jewish neighbour years ago

Why no flowers on their graves?

They don’t like to kill anything

They leave a stone to say someone has visited

I thought I might like to do that

Find a bare headstone, take a small pebble

Place it there with love…

©anitadawes

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7 responses to “#FlashFiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry”

  1. What a beautiful tradition, Anita, and well told. I think the Buddhist tradition is to not kill anything either.

  2. Now I know why stones are left! I found this line such an incredibly beautiful act of kindness: “I will lay a flower on a few bare graves.” And stones! Nicely done, Anita!

    1. Thank you, Charli. Glad you liked the poem…

  3. Beautiful poem Anita! Because of your poem, I was inspired to write and participate.

    1. Thank you for saying so, Leanne…

  4. Thank you, Robbie…

  5. What a lovely idea for this prompt, Anita.

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