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Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge…

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Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 141 #PhotoPrompt

 

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1874

US made

Clear bottle

Secret letter

Waiting to be read

Would it be ancient words?

Time trapped inside a bottle

Would I read someone’s broken heart?

A secret love never to be told

Two lost hearts that never could become one…

©AnitaDawes

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5 responses to “Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge…”

  1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    How LOVELY, Anita. I was just telling Trent yesterday that the Jim Croce song, “Time in a Bottle,” kept rattling around in my head. I think you heard it too. <3

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      That was one hell of a coincidence…

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      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        LOL! 😍🧚‍♀️🧙🏻‍♀️

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  2. Mae Clair Avatar
    Mae Clair

    Oooh, that’s awesome! I love the take of time being trapped in a bottle!

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Glad you liked it, Mae…

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