#Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry

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99 words, no more, no less. It’s a simple constraint, an easy-to-master literary art form, and a powerful writing tool for creatives and entrepreneurs. Writers calibrate the usefulness and beauty of 99-words through weekly flash fiction challenges.

 

I was fourteen when I borrowed a bike

The judge sent me away for three weeks

for assessment to determine whether

I would be put away or given probation

This came as a shock.

You can’t wear your own clothes

Cleaning duties before breakfast

Two hours of school each day

The older girls had other duties

Sewing lessons where I made a felt penguin

Which I could take home when I leave

I never saw it again, I guess someone borrowed it

This is where I fell in love with marmalade

The kind with no bits, smooth and sweet…

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10 responses to “#Flash Fiction Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community #Poetry”

  1. Loved the combination of sweet with the sour (punishment)

    1. Thank you…

  2. Brilliant, Anita! The contrast of punishment and discovery make this story impactful.

    1. So glad you liked it, Charli, given it was a true story!

  3. Powerful.

    1. Thank you, Fleur…

      1. Most welcome always.

    2. Thanks for your support, Fleur…

      1. Most welcome.

  4. Reblogged this on D.B. Mauldin and commented:
    Flash Fiction Challenge

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