Thursday photo prompt: Open #writephoto

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Empty Rooms
To enter here is to lose your mind, your life
The house is reforming, rebuilding itself
Moving rooms from one end to the other
Building new ones, losing others
Should you be in one when it is lost
There is no telling where you will end up
Or how you will return to your own world
The house does not like the door shut
It is jammed open by a strange slab of concrete
Wedged tight against the bottom of the doorframe
Another, sloping away wedged against the outer frame
Making sure the door stays where it is
The interior is dark, moody, full of menace
Some say this is due to the missing rooms
The souls lost in the vanishing
It is a soundless place, yet the air is full of wanting
The door jam quivers as if something below
Is trying to move them, to close the door
To keep all trapped inside
Moving them around, like living pieces on a chess board
Outside there is a board with names of the foolish ones who entered
And yet the rooms appear to be completely empty
If you ask the locals, why they haven’t pulled the place down
They will tell you they have tried
Hammers bounce off the walls as if they are made of rubber
A lit match has no effect, the flame blows out
Before you can touch the building
They stand outside yelling, let us know you are still there
No returning sound has ever been heard
Others will tell you it’s not true, just Chinese Whispers
An old building left to rot, nothing more
Would you enter to find the truth?
Would you walk through those empty rooms?
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Your story of the house is like an account of the lost parts of self.
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Thanks, Suzanne…
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It is a soundless place, yet the air is full of wanting… that is spot on for this place.
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Anita sensed something about this place, she often gets funny vibes…
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Wouldn’t surpise me at all…it is an odd one.
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An Eerie and haunting piece. There’s something so uncomfortable and disturbing about a house with nothing in it.
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Definitely something wrong in that house…
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