Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge ~ #Double Etheree

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Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes
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Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 126, “Poet’s Choice of Words”

 

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Night

a time

for sleeping

for lucid dreams

A time to forget

life and all its worries

to seek answers for life’s woes

find another path to lead you

Discover all those hidden secrets

Then do not forget them all on waking

Don’t let the truth disappear with the dark

Remember those newly found answers

For they will fight to fade away

Leaving gaps to mystify

Confusion and lost truth

why bother dreaming

leaving you lost

without hope?

Wake up

Live…

watermark xjj

I managed to get in first this week, AND this is my first #double Etheree!

 

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11 responses to “Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge ~ #Double Etheree”

  1. Sue Vincent Avatar
    Sue Vincent

    Excellent, Jaye! x

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    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      I didn’t know I could do these! Something strange came over me…

      Reply
      1. Sue Vincent Avatar
        Sue Vincent

        If this is a first attempt, it is superb!

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        1. jenanita01 Avatar
          jenanita01

          It was, and I love that you think so!

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          1. Sue Vincent Avatar
            Sue Vincent

            I really do :)

            Reply
  2. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Okay… I know I’m doing well if I can get Jaye to write such fabulous poetry. You go, girl! Well done. <3

    Reply
    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      I was pleased with myself!

      Reply
      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        You should be. Well done! <3

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        1. jenanita01 Avatar
          jenanita01

          Thank you, Colleen!

          Reply
  3. Jacquie Biggar Avatar
    Jacquie Biggar

    Love this, well done!

    Reply
    1. jenanita01 Avatar
      jenanita01

      Thank you, Jacquie!

      Reply

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