#99 word Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community…

February 14, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about valentines. It can be Valentine’s Day, the exchange, love for another, romance, or friendship. Have a heart and go where the prompt leads!

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First Love

I touched her hand for the first time today

my fourteen-year-old heart sank into my boots

as she flinched away

A look of pain on her face

as if I had burned her with a hot iron

The Valentine card left on her desk

I later noticed it in the class bin

torn in half

I wondered if she was the kind

that didn’t believe in love

Later that day, my heart was doubly wounded

when I watched her kissing a girl.

They thought they were hidden by the tall trees

my love for her would never be returned…

AAAAA


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5 responses to “#99 word Challenge for Carrot Ranch Literary Community…”

  1. Lovely poem, though those first rejections can be so hard. <3

  2. Nice twist!

    1. Thank you, Jacquie…

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    Anonymous

    Nice one! I’ve had a go too.

    1. Thank you, I shall have a peek!

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