Many thanks to Sue Vincent for another lovely #writephopto prompt!

 

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Faraway

I find myself high above the clouds

Passing land and sea

Wishing I could be more than vapour

A mist that falls as rain.

Could someone catch a cup full

To bring me back again?

So many lives remembered

I cannot tell which was mine

Must I keep returning as cloud and rain?

There is no end to a circle I hear you say

Let someone catch a drop from the cloud

With mouth open wide

Before it hits the drain

I will be blessed in time to be born again…

©Anita Dawes

 

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12 responses to “#Writephoto: Faraway…”

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  3. Olive this, it’s right up my street 💜💜

  4. Anita, I love this poem. Very creative, each line spirals to the next in loving waves.
    Beautiful!
    Jordan

    1. Thank you for such lovely comments, Jordan…

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  6. Exquisite, Anita.

    1. Anita loved that you … so do I!

  7. What a clever theme, Anita. Loved it.

    1. So kind of you to say that, Steve. We both thank you so much…

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