I had a lovely afternoon yesterday, despite the gloomy skies and gathering rain clouds.

We had been promised thunderstorms and torrential rain and although we have been disappointed many times before, I was eternally optimistic, as usual.

I thought I could feel the building electricity in the air, although it could have been wishful thinking I really hoped it wasn’t.

The time went on, but I remained hopeful, scanning the skies for possible clues. So, when I heard the first distant rumble, I waited, almost holding my breath, for another confirming rumble.

“You know that’s all we ever get,” quoted my sister. She is not known for her optimism.

I just smiled.

I wasn’t in the mood for an argument, least of all about something like the weather.

The next rumble was a little louder.

“It’s just fooling you. You know this is what normally happens.”

I couldn’t detect any doubt in her voice. I just smiled.

The next rumble was loud and echoed around the house. My sister never said a word. The next rumble was more of a bang, a bang that caused all the birds in the garden to fly to a safer spot.

What happened next was one of those Hollywood movie versions of a storm, a gloriously extended series of rumbles that didn’t want to stop, so loud I couldn’t hear myself think.

“My word…,” said my sister.

And I smiled even more…

(and the rain wasn’t bad either!)


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9 responses to “The Sound of Thunder”

  1. Great.

    1. It really was, John…

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    Gwen M. Plano

    I live in the high desert, and the rare storm can be dramatic. It’s always exciting to watch. Your story brought back memories of living in the Midwest. Oh My! 😊

    1. Glad to be of interest, Gwen. We do love a good storm too!

  3. I haven’t seen lightening like that since I don’t know when…or had a decent thunderstorm…

    1. It was a long time coming, but we’re so glad it did, Cathy…

  4. When I moved from the east coast to the west I was so disappointed that they hardly ever get thunder and lightning storms like we did in the east- I even wrote a poem about it years ago- Ill have to dig it out and see if it is any good.

    1. I’d love to read that!

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