The Unrepeated Sin… for @The Sunday Whirl #Wordle644 #Poetry

An angel’s scream echoes across the universe.

At the loss of his wings

He sits and watches the sunset,

a last-minute painting.

As frenzied swirls of colour fill his mind,

light lunges across the water.

Sober bees go about their business.

An urgent feeling of loss

gripped the angel‘s heart.

Words repeating in his mind.

How can he regain his wings?

Can he prove it to be a momentary lapse?

A sin he will not repeat?

©AnitaDawes2024


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6 responses to “The Unrepeated Sin… for @The Sunday Whirl #Wordle644 #Poetry”

  1. This is an intriguing piece!

    1. Thanks, we’re glad you think so!

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    Gwen M. Plano

    What a fascinating poem! I love it. And I’m rooting for the angel. 🤗

    1. thank you, Gwen… Anita is on form lately…

  3. I’m pulling for the Angel!!!

    1. Good for you! someone has to…

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