Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

The Unrepeated Sin… for @The Sunday Whirl #Wordle644 #Poetry

An angel’s scream echoes across the universe.

At the loss of his wings

He sits and watches the sunset,

a last-minute painting.

As frenzied swirls of colour fill his mind,

light lunges across the water.

Sober bees go about their business.

An urgent feeling of loss

gripped the angel‘s heart.

Words repeating in his mind.

How can he regain his wings?

Can he prove it to be a momentary lapse?

A sin he will not repeat?

©AnitaDawes2024

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  1. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    This is an intriguing piece!

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      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      Thanks, we’re glad you think so!

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  2. Gwen M. Plano Avatar
    Gwen M. Plano

    What a fascinating poem! I love it. And I’m rooting for the angel. 🤗

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      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      thank you, Gwen… Anita is on form lately…

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  3. Annette Rochelle Aben Avatar
    Annette Rochelle Aben

    I’m pulling for the Angel!!!

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      Jaye Marie and Anita Dawes

      Good for you! someone has to…

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