Set in Ice… #Poetry #TheSundayWhirl #Wordle642

Image by Sergio Cerrato – Italia from Pixabay

Set in Ice

Surfacing from a deep sleep

The room I slept in

felt colder than the North Pole

There was a risk of getting frostbite

As I watched, my breath spins in circles

around the room, beads of ice lace the glass,

obscuring my view from the window

Retrieving the milk from outside

felt like walking on a slippery ice rink.

The top of the milk had pushed its way

out of the bottle like a cream lolly.

Bearskins hung stiff, frozen on the line.

Life here could be brutal.

If you had eyes to see, there is a thread of beauty

running through this unforgiving land

Set in ice, pixie faces smile back at you…

©AnitaDawes2024


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13 responses to “Set in Ice… #Poetry #TheSundayWhirl #Wordle642”

  1. Excellent use of all the words. What a story!

    1. Thanks Susi…

      1. You’re welcome!

  2. Beautiful imagery and photos!

    1. Thank you, we are glad you enjoyed it!

  3. Beautiful poem and image.

    1. Thanks Ron, and welcome…

  4. Such a vivid picture of winter when so close to nature. I love the pixie faces. :-) Beautiful poem, Anita.

    1. We thank you for your feedback, Diana… 💖

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    Within reading this wonderful poem i also felt the coldness. I hope the next one is about holidays somewhere in the warmer South. ;-) xx Michael

    1. I appreciate your comment, Michael…

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