#TankaTuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 326, 6/27/23
This week the words to choose synonyms for are ;
Close & Open
Near to you I feel your breath on my neck I am undone, lost my world is now crowded the tightness around my heart squeezing the air from my body why did I let you go, shut the door? think how we used to be when love held us… ©AnitaDawes2023
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Oh, the regrets…you did the prompt well and made me feel for this narrator, Anita. Lovely. Blessings. xoxo
Thanks for the lovely feedback, Selma… xxx
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Oh, the sadness…you’ve captured it well. And you’ve brilliantly used the prompt. 💙
My sister has the soul of a poet, I am always surprised by what turns up out of the blue…
So full of emotion ❤️
Thank you so much! 💕
Heart rending poem.
Thank you for commenting, Robbie, means a lot… XX
Anita, it’s so good to see you writing poetry again. You’ve added so much emotion to this poem. I can really feel the regret! 🩵
Anita appreciates your feedback, Colleen, as do I … XX
Always a pleasure Jaye and Anita. I’m just happy to see you girls writing poetry. 💖
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Those regrets can linger. (K)
Unfortunately…
Those memories become haunting fantasy after awhile. You capture the anguish of the haunted person very well here.
Thank you for such a lovely comment! 💕
You’re very welcome :)
Lovely and sad.
Thank you, Vivienne… 💕
Beautiful, Anita
Thanks Steve. Anita is delighted! 💕
Beautiful and heartfelt
Thank you so much, Sadje 💕
You’re most welcome
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