Rain Fall… Liquid Magic… #Poetry #CarrotRanch Literary Community…

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Rain fall
I care less where it comes from
Only that it comes
Liquid magic from above
Tiny drops that cling
To the edge of a leaf
A jewel that remains for hours
While others disappear
Watch the birds taking a bath
Creating perfect dancing spheres
Of liquid magic
That drop into the pool
Waiting to dance again
Where would we be without it?
No puddles to splash in
No boating holidays
No lounging by the sea
Life cannot be without it
I cannot be without it
Best of all, rain on my window
Watching each drop race down…

©AnitaDawes2022

April 11, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the phrase, water falls. Where is the water coming from? How does it shape a story? Who does it involve? Go where the prompt leads!


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14 responses to “Rain Fall… Liquid Magic… #Poetry #CarrotRanch Literary Community…”

  1. This was so beautiful, Anita. <3

    1. Thank you for such a lovely comment, Colleen…

      1. You’re welcome. 💖

  2. […] Rain Falls by Anita Dawes […]

    1. We really appreciate this, thank you…

  3. I love watching rain on my windows.

    1. It is fascinating, isn’t it? 🌧🌧

      1. Yes, it is. Mesmerizing at time, too. Lovely poem, Anita. ~nan

        1. Thank you so much Nan…

  4. Yes, beautiful! I can imagine myself sitting with a cup of coffee watching the rain droplets. :)

    1. 🌧🌧

  5. Beautiful!!

    1. Thank you, Jan… 💕

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