#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 266, 3/22/22, #THEMEPROMPT
FIRE & WATER
The clock struck midnight twice storm winds blew hard the old house rattled thunder had us hiding lightning lit the tree flame red hours later, rain took the flames back slowly creeping from under the table silence returned, filling the house with peace… ©AnitaDawes2022
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What a storm! You’ve captured it well, Anita. And I love your syllabic form. Bravo! 💗
Thanks Gwen…💕
You’ve written this so vividly, Anita… I can really picture it in my mind :-)
Sincerely,
David
Thank you, Ben or David… 🙏🏻
You’re welcome :-)
(My first name is ‘David’, and the word ‘ben’ simply means ‘son of’ in Hebrew – thank you for checking!)
Take care,
David
Thanks for explaining, David…
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Powerful. xx Michael
Glad you liked it, Michael…
I felt like I was right there in that storm. Great poem, Anita! :-)
Thank you so much, Yvette…
What a lovely poem using the theme of fire and water, Anita. How are you doing? Good to see you writing poetry again, my friend. <3
Anita is doing very well, Colleen and glad you liked her poem! 💕🙏🏻
Tell her hello from me. I’m sending hugs and love to you both. <3
and very welcome they are too, Colleen… thank you!
<3 <3 <3
Nice, A Beautiful story
Thank you!
Welcome
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