#TankaTuesday 2/8/22 #Poetry Challenge No. 260, #SpecificForm: Abhanga
Old Melodies Long locked inside the dark my heart took sudden flight my eyes did see the light through old sorrows Darkness tells of old days taken by memories so long old melodies lost to my mind ©AnitaDawes2022
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Anita, this is excellent. You have some unforgettable lines: “my eyes did see the light
through old sorrows.” That last stanza was exceptional. You might have found your new favorite form. <3
Thank you so much, Colleen, we hoped you would like our contribution…
I did! ❤️
Being able to find light in the darkness is a blessed strength. Great poem, Anita! :-)
Thank you so much, Yvette…
Sorrows and memories can take us to the darkness. Great poem!
Thanks Elizabeth…
This is gorgeous, Anita. What a beautiful poem. I flows effortlessly.
Nothing wrong with Anita’s brain, I’m pleased to say…
:-)
Beautiful words in our old memories :)
Thank you so much… 💕
“See the light through old sorrows” … I adore those lines! Beautiful poem, Anita 💕🙂
Thank you so much, Harmony…
Beautiful! Yes, let us every day start like the first day of our life. Its worth to do so, because its always a gift, for everyone. xx Michael
Thank you so much! 💕
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